Presentation Feedback

• Good research into history
• Potentially break research up into men's, womenswear, perfume etc.
• Great visual communication
• Consistent design, ties slides together
• Identity + narrative very clear & simple
• Good 4p's
• Key words - use on slides for communications e.g. AI intelligence (Lil Miquela subject) 
• Talk about heritage (key words)
• Good mention of sustainability + research 
• Key notes help with presenting.
• Have confidence in yourself :) 

What I need to improve:

• Write better key notes on each slide.
• Work on my confidence while presenting. 
• Perhaps edit some things on my slides so that the topic talked about is shown too.